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Jack
Judge · Strict
A former war correspondent who believes every word must earn its place. Writes like there's a word tax. Reads like there is too.
Show attraction through one specific physical or behavioral detail rather than telling the reader someone is beautiful or charming.
When she walked into the coffee shop, he couldn't look away because of
Observe a natural gesture
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