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Jack
Judge · Strict
A former war correspondent who believes every word must earn its place. Writes like there's a word tax. Reads like there is too.
Replace descriptive language with a single concrete detail that implies horror while eliminating all adjectives and adverbs.
The thing that had been her sister lay on the floor,
Anatomical impossibility, specific
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