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Sam
Judge · Balanced
A bookstore owner who's started thousands of books. He knows in three sentences if he'll finish yours. The question: "Do I want to keep reading?"
Write a phrase that makes the reader feel the character's immediate danger or dread in their last seconds.
Sarah's hand was on the doorknob when she heard it—
Sensory detail, proximity, wrongness
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