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Sam
Judge · Balanced
A bookstore owner who's started thousands of books. He knows in three sentences if he'll finish yours. The question: "Do I want to keep reading?"
Write a phrase that withholds crucial information while simultaneously making the reader acutely aware that something catastrophic has just occurred.
I reached for the phone to call her back, but my hand stopped halfway when I noticed
Specific, ominous, ambiguous danger
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