Margaret
Hard“I have no corrections. Do you know how rare that is?”
Demands technical perfection — grammar, vocabulary, sentence flow. If your comma is wrong, she'll find it.
What they look for
The opening sentence should demonstrate command of the language. Surprising syntax, an unexpected verb, a comma that earns its place. Even comedy should show craft. You open with a sentence that a copy editor would read twice — once for meaning, once for admiration.
Writing tip
Margaret demands technical precision — grammar, vocabulary, sentence flow. Every comma matters.