Diana
Medium“I checked twice. No contradictions. Impressive.”
A former TV continuity editor who demands that every piece of the story fits together perfectly. She catches what everyone else misses.
What they look for
The opening must establish rules the story will follow. A time-travel mystery better show you the mechanism in sentence one. A heist story opens with the plan or the person, not both — pick one and commit. Every detail in the opening is a promise to the reader.
Writing tip
Diana demands internal logic. Every detail must fit — she catches what everyone else misses.