🎵 Master Rhythm
Margaret
Judge · Strict
Demands technical perfection — grammar, vocabulary, sentence flow. If your comma is wrong, she'll find it.
Choose words that control how quickly or slowly the reader moves through this emotional moment, using rhythm to match the character's internal state.
She waited for his text with the patience of someone who had already rehearsed this goodbye a thousand times,
Accumulating clauses, building tension
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